What if someones reading response looked like this?:
This is a great piece, so score it a 100. Thank you.
There was 100 doves. The man killed the bird. The bird was white. And the bird was rich. It was rich because it had a big diamond ring. Well, the bird died. But right before that, the bird rhymed at him and told him he would have a lot of dumb stuff. The man did not want the dumb stuff so he killed it because it was annoying. He twisted its neck. And it died. The end.
If this piece of writing is too long, I am sorry but there was just so much to write about.
This is a good piece so grade it well. I did not read the story because it was boring. Thank-you and good bye.
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